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disturbed-chaos :: Dark Domain :: Creative Scene :: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] Author Topic: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] (Read 241 times) [F]idelia [A]niela Administrator member is offline E C H O Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 129 Karma: 1 Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Thread Started on Jan 4, 2007, 4:16pm » At a quick lope he made his way back into his terrain, it was peaceful with the sounds of the birds cheerping and the wind blowing through the tree's they were perched on. And the few mares who were claimed to his land were grazing quietley until their king had arrived home, they began to whinny and nicker, not in welcoming but in as if saying there goes the peace and quiet, his muscular frame moved towards them and he slowed to a no rythmed trot right threw the sassy pack of mares, he bit any who were still close to him while he broke up their peace and they lashed out at him with a high pich squeal and ran away, yup, the stubborn herd he owned was usaully like this, but when it came to protection they all crowded behind the ebon beast for protection from the danger on the land, they were almost as much as cowards as that mare they had met today, but atleast they striked out at him, and not jsut bared their teeth. Snorting he turned his bulky crown to make sure Lyssa was coming, the muscles in his nape lit up in a blinding shine and his harks flicked forward, the smell of the once king's corpse had left his land a month after it had decomposed all that lay left on hisl ands were the bones, almost barried in snow. The land now was scented of the wild again, and once in a while a wet scent would be lifted over it when the tide grew higher during summer and the waves crashed against the shore. Soon he became motionless and waited to see his new mare come out from the tree's, he knew she would follow because she seemed interested in him, at least a tiney bit, enough to stay claimed as his mare. His pools slowley made their way to the far side of the terrian, the ice from where the lake usaully was showed through the gaps in the tree's, there would be less summer this winter, they would have to create or find a hole in the ice to drink from, or they would have to travel to the unclaimed lands were there is a small stream where water runs during winter. Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged W I S H Studio L Y S S A Administrator member is offline Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 18 Karma: 0 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #1 on Jan 4, 2007, 4:37pm » Lyssa arrived. It was slow, calm and collected. Every step was as perfected and deliberate as the last. The silence around her was painful as she drew out her journey into an elegant parade showing she would take her time and none would change that. She ignored the flickering shadows all around her for they would be more scared of her if they dared approach. But they did not. They just darted either side in the half light as she waltzed into the new land she would call her dwelling. Dark pits were glazed over with determination as her body swaggered with her strong movements. She was covering ground quickly despite the look of her well practised pace and she knew she was not far behind the dark King who had claimed her. She had been fortunate to see the weakling earlier that day with him, for he had cemented in her mind a better taste than most stallions. Most would go for any mare, regardless of spirit or temperament or actions, just to get another member to breed. But he let the vamp run off. She knew now her choice of leader had been a good one. Well…at least that’s what first impressions said…he could still prove them wrong. Apon kissing the loom with her unshod daggers she noticed other mares, more than she cared to be around, she let a low rumbling hiss leave her throat as she watched them. They would get along just fine if they stayed out of her way. A horrific song was thrust from her larynx to find the shadow lord from among the inferiors. At least now she could not run into any pathetic light hearts that were contaminating the arena. She strongly believed that she, herself, being a warrior, and others could control the minds of those neutrals, and persuade them into joining the darks for the battle of the alliances. And they would destroy the meek or capture them as slaves…whichever the king saw fit. And they would be remembered. And they would be feared. And they would be exhaled in history. And this is where the story begins… « Last Edit: Jan 4, 2007, 4:37pm by L Y S S A » Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged [F]idelia [A]niela Administrator member is offline E C H O Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 129 Karma: 1 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #2 on Jan 4, 2007, 4:57pm » A grin crossed his lips as he saw his new mare making her way deeper into the land, and her actions towards the other mares only made him burst out into a small session of laughter after the mares had almsot all rolled their eyes at Lyssa, Guess respected her more than any other mare he had ever met, he had no respect for his mother, she was just another one of those tramps, she had a new foal every spring and left her old ones, she annoyed him to much, so when he turned three he returned to his home land and killed the wrench with everything he had learnt from his father, that only made him even more blood thirsty, so he killed half of his family, his father and a few sisters survived, Hollywood Havonia is one of the sassey mares in his herd, and that is his full sister, though she is not as dark as he is she can be quiet the trouble causer at times. She had learned to stay out of his way at a young age, after watching one of her best friends taken down by him. Guess walked next to Lyssa"Your new kingdom" He spoke and tightened his harks as one of his mares cirously sniffed Lyssa, he snapped at her with great force in his jaw"Would you honour me as a queen?" He asked her, his harks were never really perked, it was a rare sight to see on him, but when they were he was surprised or very alert of something, or charging. Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged W I S H Studio L Y S S A Administrator member is offline Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 18 Karma: 0 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #3 on Jan 4, 2007, 5:27pm » G I V E I N The rudeness of the mares was noted deep inside the inky depths of her mind. Oh yes she would remember it. She remembered every tiny thing anyone did against her. She had a lust for revenge and yet she had done so only a handful of times. After months of plotting, she worked out the worst ways to get back at the foes who mocked her and the fury and energy that went into the acts was so great that afterwards…even the air itself was screaming with the unholy act. That was why she sorted out whatever disagreements she had straight away. Her skull turned away from the maidens that watched her and she breathed slow steady breaths. She would have to get used to them…not because she did not want the king thinking she was bad tempered, but because she did not want blood constantly ruining her pelt. She grinned slightly back at them, her thoughts different to her portrayal. She moved over the king, as he did to her, and his stench reassigned itself within her nares. She would come to know it as well as her own if she remained there. A vicious cracking noise was made with her ivories as others dared to get near her. What on earth did they think they were doing? They should be more respectful, they had not right to get so close to her. Especially as he was offering her the Queenship. She would have taken it whether he had given it to her or not, even if she had to pry it off the cold dead body of one of his toys. But, he saved her the effort. She would defend it in such a fashion as well. I accept it, and shall defend it as much as I shall defend this realm. Her eyes glimmered with a barely noticeable spark, and the bloodthirsty wench looked at the loam below her bulk. So, the wheels were turning what was next. She was curious to here the male’s plans for the world…for he was kIng and must have had some. But would not push it just yet. Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged [F]idelia [A]niela Administrator member is offline E C H O Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 129 Karma: 1 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #4 on Jan 4, 2007, 5:42pm » Watching as his queen grew angered bu her now, mare, he chuckled deepley, his sister gave her new queen a long, cold look and then looked to her brother with deep hatred, Guess only stopped chuckling and took a large lunging step and stepped back again, only to scare the young mare, his sister quickley trot away and lashed out at Guess as she passed dhim with a squeal, he just turned his head towards her and gripped his ivroies into her rump, she squealed again and began to lope, he removed his teeth as soon as they were plunged into her rump and looked to his new queen. His sister now had many scars along her body due to her brother, infact she had the msot scars out of all the mares in the herd, he concidered the scars his branding, there for no other stallion would want a scared mare, and with several scars there is no way a stallion would even dare to talk to her. "Well then, my queen Lyssa, you are free to punish these vixen with as you wish" He said with a proud smirk"My rules towards them, well they are not much of rules but dares towards them are, if they set foot off this land without me, they will be hunted down and killed, and will look alot like that guy over ther" He spoke motioning his crown towards the dead corpse"But you on the other had are free" He added and looked to his mares, they knew the queen would be free, and by the look on their faces they knew he was being sirous. Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged W I S H Studio L Y S S A Administrator member is offline Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 18 Karma: 0 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #5 on Jan 5, 2007, 3:18pm » The new queen had already altered her stance in reflection of her status. Her long muscular pillars were pushing the piebald pregnant dog to her full height while her nape was arched into a regal curve. Her eyes became glaring slits as she looked at the other mares that dared laugh at her. However she spoke not a word to them, she simply bided her time. Yes, laugh away, she thought. Keep doing it and it will be the last thing you do. She watched the fatale storm away from the king in a childish manner and she removed her globes from her. They clung back to the duke who’s words rippled out across the wintry air towards her own harks that sucked them in to be processed. His treatment of the others did not faze her, nothing she had not seen a million times before or done herself and so it did not really register. His herd was indeed large and yet needed training and she would deliver it like he just told her she could. A malevolent grin spread disturbingly across the wench’s features as she watched them once more, noting how they began to disperse. No doubt they needed new blood in the land as well but time would bring others, and she was sure the King would only invite the greatest. A large burst of wind grazed across her spine and tangled within her raven locks as she stood, petite in size to the leader and yet taller than most mares. The zephyrs began to sooth through her peltage and yet not even the wind could tame her. The fires within her were always burning occasionally seen through the twin pools that were one way mirrors to the outside world. She could see out, but none could see in to her dying soul. Her visionaries of the darkest hue then ran over to the rotting and barely noticeable corpse of another beast, only then was the smell beginning to mingle within her nares. Its strong horrific stench rather unknown to her .Sure she had killed; stolen the life from others who would have tried to do the same back. But she had never done it somewhere which she would return to, never gone back to her work. And yet it was rather the masterpiece – a tribute to the fight…a tribute to the winner. And there lay the remains of the weakling in shame, returning to the dust he came from. Others would join him too if any tried to better her…she would fight for her Queen ship against any who fooled themselves into thinking they would do a better job, or that they could ruin her. The bone pile would increase. And so Guess, any important points in the terra that I need to know about. Scouting points for example? Areas to patrol….? A place for the royals to retreat to? Business would come, later. « Last Edit: Jan 5, 2007, 3:19pm by L Y S S A » Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged [F]idelia [A]niela Administrator member is offline E C H O Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 129 Karma: 1 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #6 on Jan 5, 2007, 3:55pm » Every now and then i get a little lost the strings all get tangled, the wires all the crossed His audits pulled to Lyssa's words as they echoed into his tight audits Near the lake a pack of wolves come over night and stalk the mares, that is really all you have to worry about or gaurd, these mares, and they are stupid enough to just listen to where the wolves tell them to go. He snorted and stomped one of his massive throut slitting daggers into the snow, at least it was not deep, at least not yet, Disturbed Chaos was known to get deep snow and the food would be sparce, so the horses from his last home land spoke of. He loward his crown and sniffed the snow, he then pushed some away with his nose and nipped at the grass. He looked to his sister who was now taking her time trying to avoid her brother and his new queen by making a big gap between herself and them and galloping towards the frozen lake. Guess grunted and flicked his banner to remove to snow that had frozen over the tips of it, finally the flies were gone for winter, and he could relax alot more. « Last Edit: Jan 5, 2007, 3:56pm by [F]idelia [A]niela » Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged W I S H Studio L Y S S A Administrator member is offline Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 18 Karma: 0 Re: Bringing home his new mare [L y s s a] « Reply #7 on Jan 11, 2007, 3:02pm » reply coming, i have a major history exam 2 mo which must be revised for loads, which explains lack of activity 2. after its over i can reply Link to Post - Back to Top   Logged Forum Jump--------------------» Home--------------------» General--------------------- OOC- Suggestions- The Script- Take the test- Affilate- Going away?- Take A Lesson- I need a owner- Create land--------------------» Distured Graphics--------------------- Graphic Script- The♣Strange♣Studio- Cursed♣Studio- Request- Pick Up--------------------» Entering The Disturbed!--------------------- Enter as a light- Enter as a neutral- Enter as a dark--------------------» Unclaimable Domain--------------------- Daylight Crest- Lifes begining- Dawning Plains- Soldier Canyon- Tryout--------------------» Light Domain--------------------- Palace of the Clouds- Quiet Springs- Dukedom of the Sun--------------------» Neutral Domain--------------------- Ocean Kingdom- Palace of the Grey- Sunset Ruins--------------------» Dark Domain--------------------- Hells Gold- Deaths Touch- Creative Scene

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